Help me upgrade.

[MCFastybloke]

Link to my ad.
Any comments on how to inprove my advert gratefully received.

http://911uk.com/ads_item.php?id=4404

 

[Ducky]

Rear 'Park' Assist...

 

[MCFastybloke]

O boll@@ks now it will never sell.
Forgot to add it has a new battery too

 

[monster]

Is the funky red rag included :redcard:

 

[Zantaz]

Nothing wrong with the wording in the advert however I do think the photos could be improved.

Silver is never the most spectacular colour to photograph so therefore maybe photograph the car in a more scenic location in the sun and use the right angles for the car.

 

[FLETCHER]

Think like a sales man, use more words. Finished in gleaming ...
presented in grey leather, poss put the price next to the options list.
The best one is the pic with a huge old house and long drive way, you dont have to live there it just sows the seed in the mind of the lookers and buyers.
Good luck.

 

[MCFastybloke]

Its that clean now I don't wanna move it

 

[911_AS]

Silver is never the most spectacular colour to photograph so therefore maybe photograph the car in a more scenic location in the sun and use the right angles for the car.

+1. Totally agree.

 

[MCFastybloke]

Car now sold,sadly.

 

[rpm]

You were obviously doing something right

A good car will always sell quickly at the right price - I hope you got what you wanted for it.

Good luck with the hunt for the new one

Ron

 

[MCFastybloke]

Thanks,its not quite straight forward as I had zero cash buyers,ended up with a 330d coupe in swap.Thats now for sale elsewhere.I am very impressed with the performance and economy of these engines.